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DETERMINATION fuels me to keep trying to save you

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hhhhh i feel so proud making this rn i had a fun tem doing this

also i got a fucking ipad for my birthday b l e s s

btw im 14 yrs old rn

not old enough to curse yet, but again, them 10 yr olds already know how to troll shit

also please give this some constructive critism. i might improve this some time in the future, but i need someone to point out my mistakes and non-mistakes.
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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

I think that the way you presented such an emotional and lovable event is truly beautiful c:
The style is unique in how you can easily see the emotions pouring within these two through the eye expressions and the gestures, showing once more of how much of an impact the game had in so many people's way of thinking. So first before I give technical stuff you can work on, let me just thank you first for reminding me of an amazing moment of what might be an amazing game for the next years to come

And I see you're trying to find out the right techniques in highlighting things like clothes and hair so for the other side of my feedback, try to manage shadings that stick to the light source so you know which parts of the two would be shaded heavily and which parts would need to brighten up. An example would be shading the back of Frisk and Asriel's head to emphasize the light that's between them within the darkness they are in. And I'm not sure myself how to word this right but if you're familiar with highlighting, you may try to brighten up those two fellows a splash of yellow to emphasize aswell about the mercy button being a huge factor to the piece. But all in all, I still absolutely love how you improved these past times so always keep it up!

hope it helps Peacy! <3